From FMMC0104
Report #1
This is a strong report, with good research, clear details and effective writing. You could deepen your analysis a bit more, considering why AP's approach seems to be effective in reaching its target audience and how it distinguishes itself from other nature/educational channels. The wiki editing seemed to be unequally distributed amongst your team - make sure everyone is participating equally. Your presentation was a bit less organized than it should have been - clarify who is supposed to cover what material more in advance, and practice the coordination between speakers. --Jason Mittell 21:39, 24 October 2010 (UTC)