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Report #1

This is a strong, well-researched, and clearly written report, with a lot of solid details and a clear structure. Be sure to proofread for a few typos, but this is a great start to the project! For your presentation, try to plan & outline more clearly to avoid losing track of details and structure. --Jason Mittell 00:53, 26 October 2010 (UTC)

Report #2 and 3

These are strong and effectively written reports, with good sources and clear ideas. As I mentioned in class, it would be useful to consider Bravo's purchase of Television Without Pity and see how it fit with its overall online strategy. Otherwise, just revise for typos. Your presentations were generally effective, although the second one was a bit scattered in terms of organization. Good work!--Jason Mittell 14:45, 23 November 2010 (UTC)