https://mediawiki.middlebury.edu/FMMC0104/index.php?title=Talk:CNN&feed=atom&action=historyTalk:CNN - Revision history2024-03-28T11:49:12ZRevision history for this page on the wikiMediaWiki 1.35.14https://mediawiki.middlebury.edu/FMMC0104/index.php?title=Talk:CNN&diff=1382&oldid=prevJason Mittell: /* Report #1 */2010-11-23T15:39:51Z<p><span dir="auto"><span class="autocomment">Report #1</span></span></p>
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<tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>This report outlines some solid details about CNN, with a clear structure. Your account is too descriptive, lacking in analysis of the significance of the details you mention, and overlooking some key issues like target audience, funding base, and strategies to distinguish the channel amongst its competitors. Be sure to proofread more thoroughly for typos and proper use of italics of TV titles. Your presentation had some good points, but tended to be a bit vague and lacking in analysis. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 02:01, 26 October 2010 (UTC)</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>This report outlines some solid details about CNN, with a clear structure. Your account is too descriptive, lacking in analysis of the significance of the details you mention, and overlooking some key issues like target audience, funding base, and strategies to distinguish the channel amongst its competitors. Be sure to proofread more thoroughly for typos and proper use of italics of TV titles. Your presentation had some good points, but tended to be a bit vague and lacking in analysis. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 02:01, 26 October 2010 (UTC)</div></td></tr>
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</table>Jason Mittellhttps://mediawiki.middlebury.edu/FMMC0104/index.php?title=Talk:CNN&diff=750&oldid=prevJason Mittell: New page: == Report #1 == This report outlines some solid details about CNN, with a clear structure. Your account is too descriptive, lacking in analysis of the significance of the details you menti...2010-10-26T02:01:23Z<p>New page: == Report #1 == This report outlines some solid details about CNN, with a clear structure. Your account is too descriptive, lacking in analysis of the significance of the details you menti...</p>
<p><b>New page</b></p><div>== Report #1 ==<br />
This report outlines some solid details about CNN, with a clear structure. Your account is too descriptive, lacking in analysis of the significance of the details you mention, and overlooking some key issues like target audience, funding base, and strategies to distinguish the channel amongst its competitors. Be sure to proofread more thoroughly for typos and proper use of italics of TV titles. Your presentation had some good points, but tended to be a bit vague and lacking in analysis. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 02:01, 26 October 2010 (UTC)</div>Jason Mittell