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Revision as of 21:18, 25 October 2010 by Jason Mittell (talk | contribs) (New page: == Report #1 == This is a solid account of the channel, with some good sources and clear details. Listing demographics doesn't add anything to your account - and the source is actually abo...)
Report #1
This is a solid account of the channel, with some good sources and clear details. Listing demographics doesn't add anything to your account - and the source is actually about the CartoonNetwork.com website, not the TV channel itself. You need to deepen your analysis more than just reporting on information, exploring why it's undertaken certain strategies & approaches, and be sure to avoid repetition. Your presentation was well-detailed & clear. --Jason Mittell 01:18, 26 October 2010 (UTC)