https://mediawiki.middlebury.edu/FMMC0104/index.php?title=Talk:Disney_Channel&feed=atom&action=historyTalk:Disney Channel - Revision history2024-03-28T14:24:12ZRevision history for this page on the wikiMediaWiki 1.35.14https://mediawiki.middlebury.edu/FMMC0104/index.php?title=Talk:Disney_Channel&diff=1387&oldid=prevJason Mittell: /* Report #1 */2010-11-24T19:21:14Z<p><span dir="auto"><span class="autocomment">Report #1</span></span></p>
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<tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>This is a solid account of the channel, with excellent research and good analysis in points. The report is erratic in its writing - be sure to have one person proofread for consistent tone & format, avoiding long paragraphs and making sure to italicize titles consistently throughout. Your presentation was good, although be sure to plan a bit more to avoid overrunning the time limit. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 15:09, 30 October 2010 (UTC)</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>This is a solid account of the channel, with excellent research and good analysis in points. The report is erratic in its writing - be sure to have one person proofread for consistent tone & format, avoiding long paragraphs and making sure to italicize titles consistently throughout. Your presentation was good, although be sure to plan a bit more to avoid overrunning the time limit. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 15:09, 30 October 2010 (UTC)</div></td></tr>
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</table>Jason Mittellhttps://mediawiki.middlebury.edu/FMMC0104/index.php?title=Talk:Disney_Channel&diff=767&oldid=prevJason Mittell: New page: == Report #1 == This is a solid account of the channel, with excellent research and good analysis in points. The report is erratic in its writing - be sure to have one person proofread for...2010-10-30T15:09:58Z<p>New page: == Report #1 == This is a solid account of the channel, with excellent research and good analysis in points. The report is erratic in its writing - be sure to have one person proofread for...</p>
<p><b>New page</b></p><div>== Report #1 ==<br />
This is a solid account of the channel, with excellent research and good analysis in points. The report is erratic in its writing - be sure to have one person proofread for consistent tone & format, avoiding long paragraphs and making sure to italicize titles consistently throughout. Your presentation was good, although be sure to plan a bit more to avoid overrunning the time limit. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 15:09, 30 October 2010 (UTC)</div>Jason Mittell