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Report #1

This is a solid account of the channel, with excellent research and good analysis in points. The report is erratic in its writing - be sure to have one person proofread for consistent tone & format, avoiding long paragraphs and making sure to italicize titles consistently throughout. Your presentation was good, although be sure to plan a bit more to avoid overrunning the time limit. --Jason Mittell 15:09, 30 October 2010 (UTC)