https://mediawiki.middlebury.edu/FMMC0104/index.php?title=Talk:ESPN&feed=atom&action=historyTalk:ESPN - Revision history2024-03-28T14:07:37ZRevision history for this page on the wikiMediaWiki 1.35.14https://mediawiki.middlebury.edu/FMMC0104/index.php?title=Talk:ESPN&diff=1388&oldid=prevJason Mittell: /* Report #1 */2010-11-24T19:45:33Z<p><span dir="auto"><span class="autocomment">Report #1</span></span></p>
<table class="diff diff-contentalign-left diff-editfont-monospace" data-mw="interface">
<col class="diff-marker" />
<col class="diff-content" />
<col class="diff-marker" />
<col class="diff-content" />
<tr class="diff-title" lang="en">
<td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">← Older revision</td>
<td colspan="2" style="background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;">Revision as of 19:45, 24 November 2010</td>
</tr><tr><td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno" id="mw-diff-left-l1" >Line 1:</td>
<td colspan="2" class="diff-lineno">Line 1:</td></tr>
<tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>== Report #1 ==</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>== Report #1 ==</div></td></tr>
<tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>This report contains some good details and clear writing, but lacks sufficient analysis - it feels too much like a "data dump" of information rather than a consideration of how the channel works within the context of the TV industry. You claim that ESPN has a "monopoly" on sports broadcasting, but this is untrue - sports pervades networks and there are numerous other national & regional sports channels. Be sure to proofread your compiled reports to avoid repetition and convert bulleted lists into clearly written paragraphs. For your presentations, print out notes to more effectively manage and structure your time. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 16:02, 30 October 2010 (UTC)</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>This report contains some good details and clear writing, but lacks sufficient analysis - it feels too much like a "data dump" of information rather than a consideration of how the channel works within the context of the TV industry. You claim that ESPN has a "monopoly" on sports broadcasting, but this is untrue - sports pervades networks and there are numerous other national & regional sports channels. Be sure to proofread your compiled reports to avoid repetition and convert bulleted lists into clearly written paragraphs. For your presentations, print out notes to more effectively manage and structure your time. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 16:02, 30 October 2010 (UTC)</div></td></tr>
<tr><td colspan="2"> </td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;"></ins></div></td></tr>
<tr><td colspan="2"> </td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">== Report #2 & 3 ==</ins></div></td></tr>
<tr><td colspan="2"> </td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color: #202122; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><ins style="font-weight: bold; text-decoration: none;">These reports offer some good points and information, but they fall short in terms of detailed analysis. Your section on programming insufficiently discusses the content and form of the shows themselves, and the audience report does not truly analyze how fans engage with the channel via the website. Be sure to proofread for typos and clarity of writing. Your presentations were mixed, with a solid account of ''SportCenter'' but underdeveloped and vague account of the website. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 19:45, 24 November 2010 (UTC)</ins></div></td></tr>
</table>Jason Mittellhttps://mediawiki.middlebury.edu/FMMC0104/index.php?title=Talk:ESPN&diff=768&oldid=prevJason Mittell: New page: == Report #1 == This report contains some good details and clear writing, but lacks sufficient analysis - it feels too much like a "data dump" of information rather than a consideration of...2010-10-30T16:02:29Z<p>New page: == Report #1 == This report contains some good details and clear writing, but lacks sufficient analysis - it feels too much like a "data dump" of information rather than a consideration of...</p>
<p><b>New page</b></p><div>== Report #1 ==<br />
This report contains some good details and clear writing, but lacks sufficient analysis - it feels too much like a "data dump" of information rather than a consideration of how the channel works within the context of the TV industry. You claim that ESPN has a "monopoly" on sports broadcasting, but this is untrue - sports pervades networks and there are numerous other national & regional sports channels. Be sure to proofread your compiled reports to avoid repetition and convert bulleted lists into clearly written paragraphs. For your presentations, print out notes to more effectively manage and structure your time. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 16:02, 30 October 2010 (UTC)</div>Jason Mittell