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Report #1
This report contains some good details and clear writing, but lacks sufficient analysis - it feels too much like a "data dump" of information rather than a consideration of how the channel works within the context of the TV industry. You claim that ESPN has a "monopoly" on sports broadcasting, but this is untrue - sports pervades networks and there are numerous other national & regional sports channels. Be sure to proofread your compiled reports to avoid repetition and convert bulleted lists into clearly written paragraphs. For your presentations, print out notes to more effectively manage and structure your time. --Jason Mittell 16:02, 30 October 2010 (UTC)