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Report #1

This is a strong account of the industrial details of the channel, with good resources. You could discuss target demographics more clearly, identifying how the shoppers intersect with traditional markers of age, gender, class, etc. Make sure everyone is contributing to the wiki with some balance across the three projects. Work to structure your presentations more clearly, avoiding repetition and laying out your ideas with a clearer throughline. --Jason Mittell 20:22, 28 October 2010 (UTC)

Report #2 & 3

These reports offer some good points about the shows and website, with solid details and writing. Your analysis is a bit underdeveloped, especially concerning the industrial strategies of the two shows. Be sure to proofread for typos and fixing problems with the citations. There still is an imbalance in terms of who is contributing actively to the project. Your 2nd presentation was too descriptive, lacking analysis, but your 3rd one was more effective in analyzing the online strategies. --Jason Mittell 22:40, 24 November 2010 (UTC)