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This is a strong account of the industrial details of the channel, with good resources. You could discuss target demographics more clearly, identifying how the shoppers intersect with traditional markers of age, gender, class, etc. Make sure everyone is contributing to the wiki with some balance across the three projects. Work to structure your presentations more clearly, avoiding repetition and laying out your ideas with a clearer throughline. --Jason Mittell 20:22, 28 October 2010 (UTC)