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Report #1
This report contains solid details, research and information, but does not always present them as clearly as it could - there's not clear enough structure for how your points should be organized. You don't sufficiently explore how Showtime seeks to differentiate itself from HBO, and how the premium cable business model works. Avoid lists of information, but incorporate details into analysis. Your presentation was effectively structured and informative. --Jason Mittell 16:57, 30 October 2010 (UTC)