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== Report #1 ==
 
== Report #1 ==
 
This is a solid report, with good sources and details, and effective analysis. Avoid using lists to "info dump," but incorporate relevant information into your analysis. Be sure to italicize TV titles throughout, and fix the source formatting. Your presentation was solid, but be careful of getting bogged down in superfluous details. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 16:30, 30 October 2010 (UTC)
 
This is a solid report, with good sources and details, and effective analysis. Avoid using lists to "info dump," but incorporate relevant information into your analysis. Be sure to italicize TV titles throughout, and fix the source formatting. Your presentation was solid, but be careful of getting bogged down in superfluous details. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 16:30, 30 October 2010 (UTC)
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== Report #2 & 3 ==
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These are a good pair of reports, with strong analysis, good details, and effective use of sources. You should edit the report to avoid internal repetition and fix typos & formatting issues in the references. The presentations were solid with good analysis and description, although be sure to plan for better time management. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 01:51, 25 November 2010 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 21:51, 24 November 2010

Report #1

This is a solid report, with good sources and details, and effective analysis. Avoid using lists to "info dump," but incorporate relevant information into your analysis. Be sure to italicize TV titles throughout, and fix the source formatting. Your presentation was solid, but be careful of getting bogged down in superfluous details. --Jason Mittell 16:30, 30 October 2010 (UTC)

Report #2 & 3

These are a good pair of reports, with strong analysis, good details, and effective use of sources. You should edit the report to avoid internal repetition and fix typos & formatting issues in the references. The presentations were solid with good analysis and description, although be sure to plan for better time management. --Jason Mittell 01:51, 25 November 2010 (UTC)