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This is a solid start to the page, with good details and some interesting analytic points. Don't divide your discussion into so many subheadings, as it disrupts the flow of the analysis. The "Uses in Depth" section should be integrated into the previous section. Expand the analysis to include some of the points outlined but not currently discussed, and clean up the writing to be clear and grammatical. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 09:09, 12 November 2013 (EST) | This is a solid start to the page, with good details and some interesting analytic points. Don't divide your discussion into so many subheadings, as it disrupts the flow of the analysis. The "Uses in Depth" section should be integrated into the previous section. Expand the analysis to include some of the points outlined but not currently discussed, and clean up the writing to be clear and grammatical. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 09:09, 12 November 2013 (EST) | ||
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| + | I mainly could use help on combining my usage section with my uses in more depth section, and I will continue to focus on the analysis | ||
| + | Thanks! | ||
Latest revision as of 20:11, 4 December 2013
This is a solid start to the page, with good details and some interesting analytic points. Don't divide your discussion into so many subheadings, as it disrupts the flow of the analysis. The "Uses in Depth" section should be integrated into the previous section. Expand the analysis to include some of the points outlined but not currently discussed, and clean up the writing to be clear and grammatical. --Jason Mittell 09:09, 12 November 2013 (EST)
Hello, I mainly could use help on combining my usage section with my uses in more depth section, and I will continue to focus on the analysis Thanks!
