Talk:Foursquare
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Revision as of 10:09, 12 November 2013 by Jason Mittell (talk | contribs) (Created page with "This is a solid start to the page, with good details and some interesting analytic points. Don't divide your discussion into so many subheadings, as it disrupts the flow of th...")
This is a solid start to the page, with good details and some interesting analytic points. Don't divide your discussion into so many subheadings, as it disrupts the flow of the analysis. The "Uses in Depth" section should be integrated into the previous section. Expand the analysis to include some of the points outlined but not currently discussed, and clean up the writing to be clear and grammatical. --Jason Mittell 09:09, 12 November 2013 (EST)
