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This is far too descriptive of a page, with no real analysis or context for understanding the significance of the application. You need to remove many of the details of functionality that sound too much like a sales pitch, and focus more on analyzing the platform. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 20:00, 13 November 2013 (EST) | This is far too descriptive of a page, with no real analysis or context for understanding the significance of the application. You need to remove many of the details of functionality that sound too much like a sales pitch, and focus more on analyzing the platform. --[[User:Jason Mittell|Jason Mittell]] 20:00, 13 November 2013 (EST) | ||
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Latest revision as of 02:20, 6 December 2013
This is far too descriptive of a page, with no real analysis or context for understanding the significance of the application. You need to remove many of the details of functionality that sound too much like a sales pitch, and focus more on analyzing the platform. --Jason Mittell 20:00, 13 November 2013 (EST)
Looking good Noris! I like your analysis section. SCR
